
by MrMander
Corey Vash stands in a dark graveyard swinging a forty-dollar sledgehammer into his own mother's headstone. He is not desecrating her memory but freeing it, smashing the carved symbol of the Church of the Guiding Truth—two hands entwined around a fiery heart—to erase the mark of the cult that brainwashed and abused her. The act of domestic rebellion is cut short when a high-beam flashlight cuts through the darkness and two six-fingered alien silhouettes speak in an incomprehensible tongue. A sudden electric jolt paralyzes Corey's nervous system, and he is hauled into the sky, leaving behind his home planet of Earth to become an exotic curiosity in an intergalactic slave trade.
This is the brutal entry point into a cosmos that operates on cold, transactional cruelty. The universe of Kentath retrogrades is not a place of wonder but a sprawling network of corporate exploitation, corrupt law enforcement, and black-market flesh pits. Corey's only immediate lifeline is a heavy metal translator collar clamped around his neck, which allows him to speak with HobridHee, a slimy blue alien roommate who casually explains that their future holds either a sex pit on Hoxxa or a fight-to-the-death arena on Boccadum. When a violent hangar shootout erupts during a slave mutiny, Corey uses a stolen plasma pistol to drop his captors and hitches a ride on the Hard Luck Hermit, a boxy mercenary vessel crewed by a cynical band of bounty hunters.
What sets this trajectory apart from typical space operas is the complete absence of grand destiny. Corey is an Uncontacted primitive who must earn his keep by scrubbing blaster scorch marks off the hull and learning to drink highly toxic space beer called shiiv. The casual brutality of the crew—the gray-skinned captain Kamak, the six-eyed giant Doprel, the red-skinned weapons expert Farsus, and the volatile pilot Tooley—becomes his new normal. The inciting incident of his abduction quickly spirals into a desperate race against a shadow conspiracy led by Morrakesh, a hyper-intelligent, mind-reading entity that seeks to rewrite galactic trade routes by systematically hunting down the crew of the Hermit.
I am Tooley Keeber Obertas, and I am the best pilot in the fucking universe!
Hard Luck Hermit
The mutiny aboard the slaver vessel collapses into a chaotic shootout in the hangar bay, bringing Corey's terrifying introduction to the wider cosmos to a bloody head. Locked in a metal cell with HobridHee, a slimy blue alien who casually explains the horrific fates of the intergalactic slave trade, Corey is thrust into a desperate bid for freedom when mutineers hand out plasma repeaters. The situation spirals when the bounty hunters of the Hard Luck Hermit breach the hangar to claim their prize, bringing three separate factions into a tense, multi-directional standoff. When a stray bolt ignites a frantic crossfire, Corey crawls through the smoke and successfully drops two targets with his unfamiliar weapon, demonstrating a raw survival instinct that catches the eye of the mercenary captain Kamak. The victory is cut short when a high-intensity bolt tears through the back of HobridHee's head, leaving him dead on the floor just steps from the boarding ramp. The cold reality of space survival hits Corey as the crew casually spaces his roommate's corpse, but his quick shooting earns him a spot on the Hermit. After Farsus safely dismantles the explosive slave collar while leaving the translator intact, the crew initiates Corey with a brutal drinking contest involving a highly toxic, meat-based space beer called shiiv. As the crew falls into drunken stupors, Farsus explains the universal truth of the Kentath retrogrades—an ancient, extinct race that seeded the cosmos with genetically engineered variants, explaining why Corey and the other humanoids share similar biology. This wild revelation leaves Corey reeling, but he accepts Kamak's official offer to join the crew, knowing he has no home to return to. The decision binds his fate to the Hermit just as a mysterious purple warship begins tracking their movements through the FTL lanes, launching them into a larger conspiracy.
Corey escapes intergalactic slavery at the cost of his only friend, joining a cynical mercenary crew to survive the hostile cosmos.
What should have been a routine prisoner transport of a silent cannibal turns into a bloody ambush in the dilapidated corridors of a remote outpost on Karzahd Station. A wall of armed cultists wearing stolen police uniforms corners Kamak, Doprel, and Farsus, demanding the release of their leader to feed their genetic-memory ritual. Corey and Tooley flank the standoff from a nearby corridor, and the sight of the fanatical cultists triggers Corey's deep-seated rage against the Church of the Guiding Truth back on Earth. Without waiting for a signal or a plan, Corey raises his rifle and fires, driving a high-velocity plasma round directly through the chest of a cultist and sparking a frantic gunfight. Farsus and Kamak follow his lead, utilizing Doprel's sturdy carapace as a living shield to absorb incoming fire while they systematically dismantle the ambush. Although the crew survives and quadruples their payout by cashing in the dead cultists, Kamak delivers a harsh lecture on professionalism, warning Corey that his impulsive bloodlust will get them all killed if he cannot control his temper. The massive payout allows them to buy Corey advanced body armor and a proper translator chip, which is painfully punched into the nerve endings behind his ear by Doprel. The crew's sudden wealth allows them to buy a ticket through a Bang Gate to the civilized Arkenne galaxy, but the violence draws the suspicious eye of To Vo La Su, a dedicated transit cop who begins tracking Corey's unregistered DNA sequence.
Corey's explosive trauma-driven reaction to a fanatical cult saves the crew but reveals his dangerous instability to his new captain.
The crew's attempts to evade their pursuers fail when they are cornered on a remote station by Vansis, a fanatical Sturit Structuralist hunter who has been executing refugees to purify his race. Vansis collaborates with corrupt local police to ambush the crew, pinning Corey and Tooley at gunpoint while Doprel is held at bay. When the corrupt officers attempt to execute the crew for the bounty, To Vo La Su, the very cop who had hounded them for paperwork, makes a lethal choice. She drives Corey's boot knife directly into the neck of the corrupt police captain, spraying blood across the room and shattering the standoff. Doprel uses the distraction to crush the remaining officers while Tooley and Corey disarm the survivors. The victory is ruined when they find a crate from the purple ship containing a note written in English with the logo of Corey's childhood cult. Vansis is dragged back to the ship, where Tooley discovers that the fanatical hunter has already executed the refugee family they had met earlier. Driven by grief and fury, Tooley executes Vansis with Corey's knife, cementing her descent into lawless violence. The crew realizes that Morrakesh is utilizing the universal manhunt as a distraction, manipulating the Structuralists and the anti-Doccan factions to keep the Galactic Council's eyes off his true objectives. The execution leaves Tooley emotionally raw, forcing her into a volatile, physical confrontation with Corey as she tries to push him away to avoid forming dangerous attachments.
A corrupt police ambush forces a law-abiding transit cop to commit murder, binding her to the crew as the conspiracy turns personal.
The crew seeks refuge at a Timeka industrial station, only for the facility to be boarded by a swarming horde of Horuk—many-armed monsters sent by Morrakesh. As the station loses power and begins to collapse under kinetic impacts, Kamak is forced to make a split-second choice in a dark elevator shaft, saving To Vo La Su while leaving the wealthy executive Kiz Timeka to be crushed and devoured. The crew scrambles back to the Hermit as the station is overrun, and Tooley pulls off a suicidal piloting maneuver, diving their ship directly through the rotating spokes of a colossal Great Wheel warship to escape. A blind FTL jump saves them from the immediate blast of a collapsing Bang Gate, but the escape leaves them adrift in dead space with a broken ship and a traumatized crew. Corey's grief turns to absolute horror when he realizes Morrakesh is a mind-reading Hakkidian Worm that has desecrated his mother's grave to extract her memories and target his deepest weaknesses. Farsus and Doprel manage to rescue the remaining slaves, including Morrakesh's majordomo Ol-Voz, and defeat a high-ranking Horuk by boiling it alive in a communal bathtub. The team boards Morrakesh's flagship, where Kamak is forced to vent the hangar to survive, resulting in the tragic death of his old ally Ghul. The battle culminates in Corey confronting Morrakesh over the comms, listening to the monster use his mother's memories to torment him, setting the stage for a final, desperate strike against the invading fleet.
The destruction of a corporate station forces the crew into a final confrontation with a mind-reading monster that holds Corey's past hostage.
Corey Vash starts his path as a displaced human primitive, snatched from his mother's grave on Earth by intergalactic slavers. Armed with a deep-seated hatred for fanatical cults and a stolen plasma rifle, he quickly adapts to the brutal realities of mercenary life aboard the Hard Luck Hermit. His primary leverage is his complete unpredictability to the mind-reading entities of the cosmos, as his thoughts are constantly clouded by trauma and rage. Corey's defining moment comes when he realizes his mother's corpse has been stolen by the Hakkidian Worm Morrakesh to harvest her memories, transforming his struggle for survival into a deeply personal quest for vengeance.
Kamak is the cynical Gentanian captain of the Hard Luck Hermit, a veteran bounty hunter who has spent decades running from his own mistakes. He operates on a strict code of survival, prioritizing payouts and fuel costs over heroism, yet he harbors a hidden well of guilt regarding a crash that paralyzed his former pilot, Catay. When forced to choose between corporate favor and the lives of his crew, Kamak consistently defaults to protecting his makeshift family, even saving a penniless transit cop over a wealthy Timeka executive. His tactical experience and willingness to play dirty are the only things keeping his volatile crew one step ahead of the universal manhunt.
Tooley is the brilliant but self-destructive Sturit pilot of the Hermit, a renegade who fled her xenophobic homeworld to escape its oppressive social structures. She copes with the constant threat of death through heavy drinking, casual violence, and a cynical detachment from her crewmates. Despite her claims of apathy, Tooley possesses an unmatched talent for flight, executing suicidal FTL maneuvers and gravity drifts that defy the physical limits of her ship. Her relationship with Corey progresses from cruel teasing to a desperate emotional anchor, culminating in her choice to fight alongside him against the oncoming Horuk invasion rather than fleeing into the deep void.
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